Speaking of Short Stories

tim_miller-the_lonely_young_and_the_lonely_old-front_coverBack when I used to do a lot of readings, I would start out by sharing somebody else’s work, and I realize that I should do the equivalent of that with the release of my book of stories, The Lonely Young & the Lonely Old. The person that comes to mind is the late William Trevor, whose Last Stories was published less than a month ago. Having died in November, he published more than a dozen collections of short stories during his lifetime, and I honestly don’t know anybody, even Shakespeare, who has given the world such a vast and varied collection of humanity. His stories, after all, were more about people than incident, and you will rarely find a more empathetic writer as Trevor.

Back in January of 2011, though, I’d never heard of him. But then I happened to find a review of his . The review ends: “The stories collected here also compose a quietly devastating argument for the beauty and power of the short story form as a tool for cutting to the quick of human desire and vulnerability.” I still remember exactly where I was when I heard this, and also my reaction. By then having spent almost ten years writing a very long poem, and feeling alienated from the writerly world that didn’t want to know about it, I was actually surprised to hear that literary authors would care so baldly and basically about simple humanity.

Even granting the fleeting fame of lots of hip writing, this was still a bit unfair; but it also put the thought in my mind: I could do that too. It had been years since I had written fiction, and I was ready for it again. Within a month, the first stories had arrived: “A Ram in the Thicket,” about a middle-aged widower conflicted about the homeless people that loiter around his work, and “The Lake,” about a couple who turn into swans on their morning commute. The rest of the stories came slowly over the next few years: seeing mothers and their daughters selling candy outside a grocery store brought on “Unburdened,” which follows one of those mothers through the store; the suicide of a family friend made me realize I needed to write the high school story, “Alone,” and confront my earliest experiences of depression; noticing how “the overbearing mother” is made a comic or annoying cliché in movies and TV gave me “I Become Breathless,” in my attempt to take such a woman seriously; my job at an insurance broker, amid cubicles and manners and rituals of interaction, gave me the lovesick young woman who narrates “Don’t Think I Don’t Know”; memories of moving away from home for the first time, and realizing I no more belonged in the new place than I did in the old, gave me the opening story, “Holy Dread”; and the weird state of the world in the summer of 2014, with planes falling out of the sky or getting lost, brought on the closing novella, “Bearing the Names of Many.” I put it best to a friend this week: “There’s no real formal or other sophistication here: these characters are mostly just open wounds, undramatic and sad people I’m daring the reader not to abandon just because there’s nothing hip or sexy about them.”

William Trevor was also astounding when it came to writing women, and I hope my stories narrated by women—“I Become Breathless,” “Unburdened” and “Don’t Think I Don’t Know”—are worthy of what (I hope) I’ve learned from women, and don’t merely seem like a guy putting on a bad mask.

I’ll end here as I would have begun a reading years ago: here is perhaps my favorite paragraph from Trevor, although this is from a novel, Love and Summer. In it, an Irish woman in the 1950s, who was powerless to refuse a marriage of convenience earlier in life, decides to stay with her husband despite a brief affair she just had. Here she is making the decision, and tell me if it doesn’t break your heart:

He didn’t want to eat, and nor did she. He went away and she heard the tractor again, before he drove it to the fields. In the silent kitchen it came coldly to her that the tragedy of the man who had taken her into his house was more awful by far than love’s denial. It came like clarity in confusion, there was a certainty: it was too late. And it came coldly, too, that the truth she yet might tell to draw the sting of his agony would cause more suffering than she could inflict, more than any man who had done no wrong deserved.


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  1. Typical of you, Tim, to take time in a presentation of your work, to acknowledge someone else and praise their work for its contribution and the debt you owe to them. Typical of the things you write and present to us on your blog, year after year, that acknowledge so many others than yourself. It certainly prompts me to read Trevor’s stories as well as yours. Oh, my plate is sooo full. And yes, the excerpt you offer is heart-breaking beyond the pale. A writer’s writer, without doubt.

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  2. By the way, how about a little biography of you someday? Do you teach? What do you think about what you are doing here, giving freely of yourself and years of obvious study? What spurs you to do it? What have your travels brought to your door? Things I’m curious about, things that might prompt some of us to consider in our own lives. Not to embarrass you. But curious.

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  3. Red, surpisingly I’m actually Kim Kardashian; I found this pseudonym a good way to explore different forms of expression.

    You know, when I moved away from home for the first time, I started writing for one of those alternative weeklies, doing weird opinion-ish things that were half about myself. I made sure to mention where I worked & hung out etc., in some hope that maybe someone would pick up on it & introduce themselves there. I’m sure throughout the blog there are lots of similar biographical breadcrumbs scattered about, for similar reasons. I read & write to alleviate loneliness, to encounter people I wouldn’t otherwise, to experience what I already know a little better or to experience what I don’t know at all. Empathy & experience. I come from a family of teachers but this is my way of doing it.

    The book of poems coming out this month has the barest bio I could muster, this is the best I can do at the moment. It’s slightly embarrassing to say this much, but I understand even this minimum if necessary:

    Tim Miller was born in the United States in 1979. He grew up in the Midwest, and has lived in Georgia, California, and Brooklyn. His previous books include the long narrative poem To the House of the Sun, the collection Hymns & Lamentations, and The Lonely Young & the Lonely Old: Stories. He edits the online poetry magazine, Underfoot Poetry, and writes about poetry, religion, history and art at wordandsilence.com. He lives with his wife and daughter in Pennsylvania.

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  4. That’s just fine, Kim. It will be enough for our investigations dept. to find you anytime they want. Your papers are in order, I trust? You do have your writer’s license? I understand, internment for busted word jockeys is particularly harsh. I’m told they are building a wall to house undocumented writers along with 100 monkeys for an indefinite period of time. You wouldn’t want that to happen to you, would you?

    Speaking of walls, pardons and Kim Kardashian. We were thinking of using you to get another pardon, from you-know-who. This time for Leonard Peltier. But we decided Paris Hilton might be a better choice. New love interest for what’s-his-name, and great relief for Melania. What do you think? I thought so.

    Send us a postcard from Guanto Writer’s Correctional Fluid Institution. Use the monkey with the painted fingernails. Rumor has it she’s the fastest typist in the joint. Good luck. Let us know when you get out. Your pal, Red.

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